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A horror flash fiction I wrote for Halloween. ![]()
THE HOUSE ACROSS THE STREET...
Enid hooked her arthritic finger around the edge of the curtain and pulled it an inch to her right. She shouldn’t worry about being seen in plain daylight, but God knew she lived on a street full of busy bodies. She peered through the small slit at the house across the street. What a disgrace. Those horrid scarecrows still stood, scattered all over the Wallace’s lawn. The calendar said November fifteenth for goodness sake. Two doors down, Christmas lights flickered and Santa waved merrily to everyone who passed by. She stepped back and the curtain drifted shut. “Sid,” she called to her husband. “Come here. The Wallace’s must be out of town. The house has been dark for days. Have you seen them? I haven’t.” She raised the volume of her voice. “Sid, did you hear me? At least they could have asked me to get their mail and watch the house. And taken down those damn scarecrows before they left.” This time when she pushed the curtain further open for a better view, a gasp lodged in her throat. It couldn’t be. One. Two. Three. There were six effigies, she was sure of it. She squeezed her eyes closed and calmed her frantic breathing. Feeling better, she inspected the neighbors yard. “Oh, God, no.” One scarecrow lingered, twisting on its stick toward her house. Its arm reached out in her direction as blood dripped from the crudely slashed mouth in its paper head. Enid’s knees collapsed and she tumbled into her husband’s favorite chair. “Sid!” A frantic yell escaped her. “Please, where are you?” A loud thump echoed from the porch. Silence. Thump. Silence. The noise doubled and the pace quickened. The one-legged monsters danced outside her door. Get up! Lock the door. Run! Terror paralyzed her. Enid wanted to scream but the sound was stuck in an empty crypt in her head. The door scraped open. Were you still screaming if no one heard you?
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36 Comments
10/1/2015 05:23:24 am
I hate mirrors in a dark room. I have to shut my eyes if I pass one and even then it's at a jog because I KNOW something is inside, waiting to grab me.
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Jennifer Davis
10/1/2015 06:27:27 am
ouija boards...nope to the nope. Can't be near them. Don't like to talk about them.
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10/5/2015 04:18:03 pm
You'd hate my house at Halloween then. I repurposed an old one and it hangs on my wall. :)
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10/1/2015 04:22:30 pm
Great flash, Debbie!!!
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Nana Prah
10/2/2015 12:46:16 am
I love your flash fiction. Creepy.
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Cathrina
10/2/2015 07:10:30 am
I hate clowns!!!! IDK why. I just do!!! Good story Debbie!!!!
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10/2/2015 09:39:34 am
Great story Debbie. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
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Hi Heather - oh, clowns instill fear in a lot of people. I had an old rag doll in my room, I don't remember who gave it to me, when I was little and it creeped me out at night. Not during the day, so I understand.
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10/3/2015 09:30:11 am
I am terrified of zombies and spiders. Worst fear? Zombie spiders!!!!
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10/3/2015 10:53:38 am
Loved the story. Many things frighten me, but most especially snakes. I cannot stand them.
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Regina Kencono Putri
10/4/2015 07:14:18 am
I think even little sound could scare several persons,including me
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Melissa
10/4/2015 10:13:38 am
Bugs freak me out!
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10/5/2015 09:44:08 am
Excellent flash fiction! Okay, I'm probably going to be laughed at--but butterflies are the only thing that scare me. *sigh*
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10/5/2015 11:54:05 am
Creepy story, Debbie!
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Michelle Willms
10/5/2015 04:43:49 pm
I loved the flash fiction. Very creepy. I'm afraid of the dark.
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Trix
10/6/2015 02:26:15 pm
Eye injuries wig me out!
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